good wee story
tis a nice wee story i'll give you that
good wee story
tis a nice wee story i'll give you that
mmmm.... well
ok im gonna be constructive (or try to be)
firstly, the humor was good, but text humor tends to suck unless its really slick and funny. yours was good observational humor for ff games (cept for 8 as your team followed you evrywhere in towns and shit) so my advice for that is BUY A MICROPHONE, they cost like £5 and u dont even need to instal it (well i didnt)
also
the graphic's: whilst im sure the graphic's are probably good for you, they kinda suck, im aware drawing talent is kinda well, not your fault but whatever, they were good for the kind of spoofyness you were going for but u need to tighten it up a bit, sime shading here, some there. also DONT DRAW BAHUMAT UNLESS YOU HAVE A GUN POINTED AT YOUR HEAD, EVEN THEN HESITATE, im sure it was good for you on flash, BUT IT SUCKED ASS, thats my one non helpfull saying
yeah, thats about it really
well done if this survives blammnation
if not good luck with your future films
its funny because its true
very nice
gets a very good point across
ppl will put anything with video game appereance's on the front page
and flash artists are indeed far to much up their own arse *cough* legendary frog *cough*
and there is indeed very rarely any original jokes in most front page films
very nicely done on the whole putting the point accross and on the original jokes (for once)
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